ext_28563 ([identity profile] elliesmeow.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] whiskeycoffee 2008-06-16 06:04 am (UTC)

Very nice. The flow and voice was very very good. I liked how you described the way Lucy felt isolated and how she liked the way Caspian looked at her. But my favorite part was the end, to be left unembellished.

-Ellie
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