Date: 2007-01-20 03:08 am (UTC)
It wasn’t fair to make her fall in love with him when she would never be old enough for him to love. (He ignored the fact that he did anyway.)

I love this line; you seem to write this nice mix of wanting and refusal that just *pings*. I really like the little details that you have; the perfume in her hair, and Guise telling himself that she was only a child and he was only her brother.

I've watched a couple of episodes of Gunslinger Girl, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who looked at Henrietta and Guise and went, 'ohgodsoinlove!' Although, considering your warning, I was expecting a little more with the sexy.
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