I haven't posted it yet. It's still coming together and getting longer and longer...
I can see where you were going with the idea of Ling trying to salvage the situation. The whole power dynamic with Ling-Lan Fan-Greed can be really tricky to navigate. It's also tricky to get Ling's motivations when the story is in Greed's POV.
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Date: 2007-02-04 01:41 pm (UTC)I can see where you were going with the idea of Ling trying to salvage the situation. The whole power dynamic with Ling-Lan Fan-Greed can be really tricky to navigate. It's also tricky to get Ling's motivations when the story is in Greed's POV.
But that's what makes writing these guys fun!