Date: 2007-02-05 03:00 am (UTC)
I really like the feel of this chapter...it's very light, yet at the same time very warm and maybe a little deep. It's hard to explain.

Though my favorite bit would probably be the end of the chapter, in which Roy cooked Al's breakfast. Reading that part especially brought a warm and fuzzy feeling in my chest. ^_^

But with each chapter this story gets better. Please continue writing this! I love it!
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