Wow. Excellent story. Usually stories like this are a bit too intense for me, but you lovely writing and the emotions you brought out made this such a great story.
The descriptions just fleshed (no pun intended) every scene, from the light reflected in the puddles on the street to everything that happened at Roy's house.
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Date: 2007-02-11 02:34 pm (UTC)The descriptions just fleshed (no pun intended) every scene, from the light reflected in the puddles on the street to everything that happened at Roy's house.
Simply beautiful!