Date: 2007-05-19 05:59 am (UTC)
Such a lovely chapter. The kiss between the blow jobs was meltingly hot (as was the sex, of course). Part of me was hoping to see Ed walk in on them, and the resulting explosion, but it would have wrecked the wedding, so I'm glad it didn't happen.

It is good to see Roy coming along, ever so slowly. I wonder if Al even remembers that he told Roy he loved him. At least Roy's dealing with it and not freaking out, even if it kept him up for awhile.

Your Gracia lived up to her name, being beautiful and gracious. Elysia being worried about walking up the aisle with a boy reminded me of the flower girl at my sister's wedding, who caught the bouquet and promptly burst into tears, thinking it meant she'd have to get married in the next year.
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